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Destiny
Junior Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 47

0 posted 2000-03-25 01:38 PM

a damsel aches
a knight appears
to calm her heart
assuage her fears

he has no sword
to wound the foe
he has no steed
on which to go

his only weapons
in this fight:
honor in darkness
truth as light

the only king
he pledges to
is life itself
and love that's true

at times when madness
takes its toll
he hears her sobbing
in his soul

and then he reaches
out his arms
and tucks her in
safe from all harms

the demons fade
the sorcerers scatter
the trolls in the kingdom
no longer matter

the damsel's tears
replaced by song
by love's compassion
she is made strong

the wrongs in camelot
all made right
by the spirit and soul of
one brave knight

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2000-03-25 01:45 PM

WoW - Welcome to Passions, Destiny. What a beautiful and romantic tale to gain entrance. I hope you will stay with us awhile.

Michael

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-03-25 01:47 PM

Destiny~
This is simply beautiful.

'and then he reaches
out his arms
and tucks her in
safe from all harms'

Tenderly rendered.
Welcome to our Passion's family.

~*Marge*

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-03-25 02:01 PM

Destiny. . .

This is a truly beautiful and romantic poem. . . it really speaks to my heart. . .

"the damsel's tears
replaced by song
by love's compassion
she is made strong

the wrongs in camelot
all made right
by the spirit and soul of
one brave knight"

It looks as though you have found your brave knight, truly he is a very lucky man. . . *sigh*

Welcome to Passions, Destiny, I too, hope that you stay with us for a long while. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-03-25 02:05 PM

A lovely poem! Welcome to the family. Check your email for a special welcome!

David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

5 posted 2000-03-25 02:53 PM

Destiny,
welcome aboard, that ws a very sweet poem. I will be looking to read more of your work.
David2

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-03-25 03:27 PM

The entire poem is lovely..."the demons fade..the sorcerers scatter..the trolls in the kingdom..no longer matter". Fantastic writing. James

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

7 posted 2000-03-25 06:39 PM

Destiny, this is indeed a wonderful poem. Welcome to the passions family

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

8 posted 2000-03-25 07:12 PM

I really liked this.. it maintains profound beauty through simplicity and constant rhythym.

VampDude
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 21
Canada

9 posted 2000-03-25 07:29 PM

Extremely beautiful poem, Destiny. It's very romantic and intense... great work!

"So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters"
-Metallica-

Windrider Silverbreeze
Junior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 33

10 posted 2000-03-25 08:01 PM

I remember feeling this way once.

Very well written for a woman who's found her knight in shining armor. Very lucky man indeed.

Welcome to Passions.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

11 posted 2000-03-26 09:00 AM

Very nice, Destiny - Welcome aboard!!

Destiny
Junior Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 47

12 posted 2000-03-27 02:32 PM

thank you all for your kind words and warm welcomes

SomeoneVEryNice encouraged me to post here... and he was right about you all (hehe)

Destiny

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

13 posted 2000-03-28 10:12 PM

Had to come back and read this one again. . . it's just so wonderful, I think it's the theme. . . I'm a sucker for a great love story about knights and damsels. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

14 posted 2000-04-29 02:10 AM

Indeed a wonderful first post Destiny.

I too believe there is no finer story than that of a fair maiden being rescued and loved by her brave knight. You are a lucky lady, hold him and never let him go.
Isis

A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

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