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Collins
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0 posted 2000-03-29 02:12 PM



The Love song of a Blinded Bird.

The sweetest song i ever heard,
The Love song of a blinded bird.
Still it sings with all its might,
Still it sings on through the night.
Why should misfortune destroy her soul.

© Copyright 2000 Collins - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2000-03-29 02:28 PM


Collins....simple, yet it speaks volumes.  Very sweet.  Just because she can't see them, doesn't mean they don't hear.  Very good!!!

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 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
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CherylLynnMckee
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2 posted 2000-03-29 02:37 PM


Very inspirational..never feel sorry
for youself...there's always someone
worse off than you anyway...Great
poem..loved it!

 

Collins
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3 posted 2000-03-30 04:42 AM


From two writers as yourselfs, that means alot.
Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-03-31 12:27 PM


Like the Thorn Bird?  yes...very good..
Collins
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5 posted 2000-03-31 06:22 AM


thanks for your reply poetdevine. Cheers
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Floating gently on a cloud....
6 posted 2000-03-31 06:42 AM


This is such a simple poem yet is says so much to me. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


Collins
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7 posted 2000-03-31 07:37 AM


it means alot to me aswell. thanks for your reply. Cheers
Collins
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8 posted 2000-04-02 08:38 PM


nite everyone.
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9 posted 2000-04-02 10:47 PM


This is a beautiful poem with a great message! Very inspirational, Collins!

Denise

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10 posted 2000-04-29 07:27 PM


thankyou.  )
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