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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-03-25 12:59 PM


On there so high above she came
Born from a silver streak of flame
She tore a trail through my soul
Burning passion I cant control

Her beauty described in mere words
A sweeter song than morning birds
Who ever hope and ever try
To please her as she passes by

When she dips and when she bends
Her graceful body never ends
And when I look into her eyes
I see a fire that never dies

Watching her dance toward the ground
The greatest entrance makes no sound
And then forever my life has worth
I've seen where heaven touched the earth


i decided i love you all!!! yuh yuh





[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-25-2000).]

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WhtDove
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1 posted 2000-03-25 01:33 AM


Ya know what? You write some excellent serious poetry!  Fantastic this was!
Michael
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2 posted 2000-03-25 05:07 AM


Walt, you are one of the few who have ever brought me to tears with a poem.  This piece is still touches me now as it did the first time I read it.  I thank you for the repost.


Michael

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3 posted 2000-03-25 06:28 AM


I'm new here and I haven't read this before...I'm so glad you reposted it tho...its a beautiful poem  

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bodies."
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christies heart
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4 posted 2000-03-25 07:44 AM


"Watching her dance toward the ground
The greatest entrance makes no sound"

Certainly worth the repost. I love the line above. Chris  

Denise
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5 posted 2000-03-25 08:32 AM


This is so beautiful, Walt! I especially loved the line:

'I've seen where heaven touched the earth'
Wow! What a line!!

Denise

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6 posted 2000-03-25 09:14 AM


Watching her dance toward the ground
The greatest entrance makes no sound
And then forever my life has worth
I've seen where heaven touched the earth

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WOW WOW

walt...this is perfection of poetry...
I love this passionate and beautiful poem...
so glad you reposted it....now it can make all of us "feel good about it"  
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman


hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2000-03-25 10:12 AM


Walt...you know I love this serious side of you. When you write like this, you shine my friend  
Love ya too by the way, yep we do...yah!

Mistikman
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8 posted 2000-03-25 01:31 PM


Sigh... this is wonderful walt. I have seen this sight myself recently, but alas, the angel is always just out of reach....
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9 posted 2000-03-25 01:37 PM


W.O.W.~
What thoughts of beauty.
Fluttering softly.
I like this facet of you very much.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2000-03-25 02:09 PM


Walt. . . this is excellent!!!

I love this. . . it's so romantic and heartfelt. . . it moves me. . . I think that I'll send this one right back to the top. . .

Thanks for the re-post!!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


tracie66
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11 posted 2000-03-25 05:18 PM


This is one hell of a poem
EXCELLENT is the word
        


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Anne Rooks

Martie
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12 posted 2000-03-25 06:09 PM


This is really very beautiful and well done, Walt.  Bravo!!
Nan
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13 posted 2000-03-26 08:30 AM


"... where heaven touched the earth"

Pretty awesome stuff, wow...

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