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The Beast Within
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The Beast Within |
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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 21Canada |
Every morning, I awake to face another day, Same old thing, the same routine, I work but cannot play, I slowly make my way through time and leave my trail behind, I scream for help, no one can hear, feels like I'm bound and tied, but then the hour approaches, when daytime turns to night, I feel something inside of me, this thing I cannot fight, I look upon my new-found self, I feel like I'm reborn, All my thoughts of good are gone, my mind is ripped and torn, The night brings out the rage in me, I found my beast within, I fall asleep as night-time ends, to have this start again... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is INTENSE, VampDude, and how well i can relate to the vicious cycle of mood! And you portrayed it superbly! Welcome! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vamp Dude, welcome to passions. Great poem. I think we all have a beast within. It is up to us to tame it. Good luck! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special welcome...  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
VampDude Intensely deep I liked it tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions  |
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