Open Poetry #6 |
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The power from within |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Have you ever stopped to feel Your veins beneath your skin They are the essence of your movement They are your power from within If you think about it long enough You can trace them to your brain But take my warning and do not think It will make you go insane You will start to feel your heartbeat Louder, louder it will get until no longer can you focus And no longer can you forget You try to go out in public To get away from all the strain But in every person, all you see Are those wretched, evil, veins Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Jenna Barkley Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 16 |
This poem is great! Keep up the great work! ~Jen |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This IS a neat poem...with elements of both light and darkness, reads very well. Welcome to Passions. (love your name/pen name) ![]() |
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