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Prima Volta
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Prima Volta ~*Marge Tindal*~ Una volta I met you I fell for your chivalrous charms Duo volte was just heavenly laying in your arms For me it was Prima Volta you said it was the same Always I'll remember calling out your name In the crescendo of passion locked in your embrace Una volta Duo volte Prima volta Perfect timing in just one place The music of the universe brought us where we are today Una volta -once is never enough Duo volte -twice over again Prima volta -first time ever I saw your eyes holding on to me In your eyes I realized Heaven waiting there Prima Volta I'd do it all over again |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What emotion there is in this piece! I love it, Marge! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I get one heck of a volta just reading this! It's beautiful  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, you gave me a volt shock too, love your poetry. Sy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Thank you for liking. I'm known to be an emotional sort of gal ! Balladeer~ Yeah, I'd volunteer to be your 'voltage regulator' any day of the week.  Seriously, you know I appreciate you ! Seymour~ Glad to 'jump-start' you ! Have you had your amperage checked ? Seriously .. thank you, my friend. *And just for the record ... our gal Lizzie made me come up with another 'romantic' post this evening ! Where are you, Lizzie ?  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely |
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Loneheart Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 92Eastern US |
As always tis but a masterpiece loved it Marge Loneheart |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Thank you.LoneHeart~ You just say the nicest things. I thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is too good Marge...course I've always loved your way with words.... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SHOCKING ISN'T IT... always creative and imaginative...our sweet margie-girl. read one of her poems... then SMILE take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marge this is just gorgeous...don't know what's going on over there these days, but I'll have whatever 'mom' is having... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ And you, young lady get a great big hug ! What a refreshing touch of friendship you are. Janet Marie~ And 'always' I am pleased to see your kind responses. Serenity~ I would just 'know' that you'd like it, little friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lets REVOLT!! [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-24-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ OH ... I like your little revolution ! I guess as long as no one finds it revolting .... I'm okay, huh ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
OOHHH Marge I love this poem..at first I wasn't sure..but then it grew on me as I read it...and then the ending...!!! It made it complete...and when I read it the second time...it all came together so well Fantastic! "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Very romantic, It of course produced the effect of longing for a loved one in me. Great poem, marge, I really enjoyed it. David2 |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge, I can feel the electricity in this piece! It is abaolutely wonderful! Love the high intensity charge! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You'd have to plug me in to get any volta But you've got my attention that's for sure Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
What a turn of the poetic word, Marge...this one is beauty in verse. ~ Claire |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tess~ Thank you so much. Guess that's all a poet can hope for ... that it all comes together for the reader. David2~ Ahhh! Mission accomplished. TerryW~ Gosh, I'm glad you found it electrifying ! Perhaps it should come with a caution label? Rex~ Plugged in ! ! Claire~ It just seemed so natural. Thank you .. you have to know that I value your reads! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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