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Corinne
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0 posted 2000-03-24 10:48 AM


  
Tragically romantic, drawing life,
creating portraits of experience,
the past mixed with future clarity.

His love imparted freely,
appearing intrepid,
but he’s hu(man),
fraught with insecurities
taught as a child.
I wonder, does he cry?

A man without environs,
"relayer" of compassion and sight,
he has sipped from icy glaciers,
climbed uncaring mountains
let the desert nearly overcome.

Sweet inspiration, as rivers flow
virtually overwhelming,
he hastens soft alpha rhythms,
projecting peace,
babe at mother’s breast,
forgetting fears.

© 2000 C.M. Bailey





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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-24 11:17 AM


This is beautiful, Corinne!  

Denise

Mike
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2 posted 2000-03-24 11:53 AM


Very nice.  I enjoyed.
Corinne
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3 posted 2000-03-24 12:11 PM


Thank you, Denise and Mike.  

Corinne

Parker
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4 posted 2000-03-24 01:29 PM


Corinne, don't all Bards cry in their own way. This poem hastens soft alpha rhythms,
projecting peace, very nice.

Parker

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5 posted 2000-03-24 01:44 PM


Corinne~
As always, little friend ...
beautifully done.
~*Marge*~



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Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2000-03-24 01:49 PM


Corinne,
You have a way of putting words together that I enjoy. *L*

RAM
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7 posted 2000-03-24 03:13 PM


   this is, indeed, very beautiful - a wonderful portrait.

RAM

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