Open Poetry #6 |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion ![]() |
Tragically romantic, drawing life, creating portraits of experience, the past mixed with future clarity. His love imparted freely, appearing intrepid, but he’s hu(man), fraught with insecurities taught as a child. I wonder, does he cry? A man without environs, "relayer" of compassion and sight, he has sipped from icy glaciers, climbed uncaring mountains let the desert nearly overcome. Sweet inspiration, as rivers flow virtually overwhelming, he hastens soft alpha rhythms, projecting peace, babe at mother’s breast, forgetting fears. © 2000 C.M. Bailey |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Corinne! ![]() Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice. I enjoyed. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Denise and Mike. Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, don't all Bards cry in their own way. This poem hastens soft alpha rhythms, projecting peace, very nice. Parker |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ As always, little friend ... beautifully done. ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, You have a way of putting words together that I enjoy. *L* |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
RAM |
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