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Slave or Master to love?
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Slave or Master to love? |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia 
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Slave or Master? The softest caress I can ever remember, Scorched my soul like a burning ember, Bittersweet, addictive taste, Cannot bear a moment to waste, Flesh is stinging from your touch, Never believed I could want this much, I'm lost within you, and you within me. We're bound and tied for eternity. Who is the master? Who is the slave? Love that was shared, and freely we gave. Chains that bind that none do see, Handcuffed heart won't set me free. So take my flesh, my soul, my heart, I'd rather die than be apart, From you my love. "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW!!!!!! Tess..i felt this one....excellent... and very passionate...WHEW  very well written, truly... The softest caress I can ever remember, Scorched my soul like a burning ember, Bittersweet, addictive taste, Cannot bear a moment to waste, Flesh is stinging from your touch, Never believed I could want this much, *SIGH* very nice, take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! This is wonderful, Tess!! Absolutely breathtaking!! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tess...wonderful work. I believe I am a slave to love though at its touch, I become jello  |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
JM and Denise thanks and Hoot_owl_rn I know exactly what you mean! Me too! "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Tess, Such passion, such fire, such.....I am speachless. Surely, you must have lived it to capture it so accurately. OUTSTANDING! INclan |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Tess, Slave or Master?.... well how can I resist that question. You be the master and I'll be the slave. I'm at your command. A Wonderful piece. no pun intended. Parker |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed muchly. Well done. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Inclan - Thank you and yes this was written with someone specific in mind Haleyja - Your at my command ?? Mmmmm now that could be fun!! Mike - Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for letting me know "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Tess, Yet another beautiful poem. This describes, with such eloquence how it feels to be uttrly consumed with and/or by love. Fantastic. Love Louise xxx I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
WOW...what an attention grabber...completely perfect...I really enjoy reading all your poetry.. |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Louise Thanks for your support!!! Hugz Cheryl Lynn… Thanks so much…it's a buzz to know people are reading..and enjoying! "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time that you've never had it before." ~author unknown~ |
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