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Kiss Me You Fool
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Kiss Me You Fool |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Kiss Me You Fool! How dear this potion de amore from the hag who lived down the lane, she spoke of Eros and Psyche and the days of Venus’ reign. She asked what I desired most from my charming intended one, of course it was his lasting kiss, his heart I will finally have won. She called upon the god Lupercus a chill filled the dark, dank room, and with my vial of purple potion chased me out with a witch’s broom. I paid a visit to my heart’s desire, my purchase behind my back, the only one home was his brother the ugly one we called Jack. Luck was not with me on this day, he took the vial from my hand and drank, and when he said “Kiss me, you fool!” you can trust that my heart sank. For just then my dear sweet prince did waltz through the front door the repulsive one was kissing me, and my love was my love no more. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This will teach you a lesson, you naughty naughty girl! You should rely on your own bewitching powers of allure, rather than some old hag's. I love this poem as much as I love your other works. Nice job, Corinne. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ what a great story! This was very well written! Liked this a lot!  -SEA |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Yes, yes I must agree. You bewitching allure is more powerfull than any potion could implore. Kiss me you fool.  Parker... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I love it...  HUGS The grape passes through the press to yield wine. Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom.. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
very cute.....we must have the same luck lolol....great poem |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Ironic, isn't it???? Brought back memories of that old movie...love potion#9!!!! Very cute Corrine!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Adriahh Junior Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 18 |
totally adorable Oh freaky little porcupine, come eat the hedgehog in my mind. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
LngJhn, you always inspire with your positive words of encouragement! Thank you, SEA, RainbowGirl, Devina, Corazon (neat nick, BTW),and Adriahh. And Parker, promises, promises! (sigh) Cor |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This place needs an email option, I always get caught trying to flirt with you. Here goes anyway. From where do you see the stars in your sky. If you look into the sky tonight, and then close your eye's very very light I'll send a kiss, up to the great abyss and Aurora's Lights will steer it right and if you wait just a little bit it'll find your lips for a gentle kiss. Parker ... the shameless flirt. If it passes through a thunderstorm, it'll be a very wet smacker. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Well I could but I don't know if I should A nice potion your wrote Corinne Here you two I have a poem I wrote for a dear friend of mine about a year ago or so, perhaps you try this Imagine There is a breeze across the sea Rather swift, short ready to flee You look upon the stars that filling the firmament above You try to figure, which on he is looking at my dove Your inner soul is shaking with fear Yes he knows how much you love him my dear Your eyes cast on a flickering ball Imagine that this the one that is his all Send your love you keep inside Hoping his heart receives the love open wide Wondering if he does know Your loving feeling will reach him and it will show Show what longing you endure Show him that you’re very sure Believe when I say this, I have been there once Hoping, that I had a similar chance Believe when I say, I called her name In busy streets without I ever felt any shame Believe when I say, that he will feel The lonely star, for him the star will be real Not only know, ……feel it in your breast He will hear your voice calling beyond the waving crest I know it works. I have was there, long time since has gone by So call out his name, don’t be shy. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
I like the poem, it shows that love is just sweet irony in a bottle, HelmutB I like your poem to, Oh the despair, the hastle the failiure, woe is me, Great stuff . |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne- Bewitching for sure ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling...reminds me of "Love Potion Number Nine"...although this is funny in parts, it also serves as a reminder we can't play with/fool love and should never try |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Parker, what a sweet, sweet poem, thank you! I think I caught that kiss in a storm, leaving me feeling safe and warm... Helmut, that piece speaks to me and I believe in this sort of mystery. Thank you, also, Angel, Marge and Hoot! Corinne |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFLMAO.... EZ come, EZ go..... You're too much, Corinne...  |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
ahhh, but this prince was only fool in that I'd not yet proved the love I felt for you, sweet lass - the strength with which you'd moved my heart to see its rightful home, a place of grace and peace; and so, it had, gladly revoked each other graceless lease. So, know, my sweet, you've long since won the heart of this poor fool - a heart that sees that yours is not a heart my brother rules. But, just in case, I asked the hag to wield her magic art upon some other neighbor lass who might then win Jack's heart. To my surprise she answered, "No! No need for such device. For I am tenant in Jack's heart and he has conquered mine." © RAM 3/30/00 |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
oh, and need I say it? they all lived happily ever after. VBS Rick [This message has been edited by RAM (edited 03-30-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ahh, what a wonderful poetic response, RAM, how can I thank you? Corinne |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
LOL... I see you been buying potions from the Wicked Witch of the East. A fine bit of entertainment and a good dose of the the truth in this one. Thanks for sharing. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne--this was a magical poem, for sure...and..shhh, where did you get that potion? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...I remember this one well Glad to see it back up |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent, magical story here! But ya know, maybe lil ol Jack is in the long run better than that handsome prince..it's been known to happen. Great work. *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
de nada, Corinna Maria |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great Corinne! So funny! Denise |
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