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Shadows Are Beautiful Silhouettes In Disguise
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Shadows Are Beautiful Silhouettes In Disguise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Shadows Are Beautiful Silhouettes In Disguise Shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise relishing in the brightness of sunshiny skies casting a relative design in honor of respect for the individual who gives off such an effect Relishing in the brightness of sunshiny skies silhouettes dance among other's smiling eyes a shadow it seems was her only will to reflect till happiness offered her the beauty to connect Casting a relative design in honor of respect now presenting a much more posed subject before she believed in the sweet simple lies dropped into her mind by sweet talking guys For the individual who gives off such an effect her evening shadows have come to perfect that within the beauty of self if one complies shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 03-24-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LD you've done it again. Shadows in disguise...I love this thought! You took it and ran with it, what a lovely way to think about it. Down right Awesome writing  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For the individual who gives off such an effect her evening shadows have come to perfect that within the beauty of self if one complies shadows are beautiful silhouettes in disguise ------------ what a beautiful, peaceful poem... lovley and calming to read... just beautiful Dreamer... take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful Gloria! I love the repetition of the lines too! Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
The mirrored wall hanging of all your compliments blessing my reflective out shinning endearment tomorrow's road to achievement is echoed by you all in the victory of your reflection in my minds view Blessing my reflective out shinning endearment the kindness you all possess is my enrichment as hours tick by and days grow long it leaves few with much time to give appreciation as you all do. Tomorrow's road to achievement is echoed by you for my inspirations are designed as an inner clue that springs from your approval granting firmament so I thank all my readers for giving me contentment All in the victory of your reflection in my minds eye do I have the motivation to continue on and comply this creative venture that becomes from blueprints of the mirrored wall hanging of all your compliments [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 03-24-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Clever, clever |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Your poems are amazing, Gloria! Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth, and Denise, Thank you very much for reading and responding, sorry I am not as creative with a reply as I was above but know I love ya just the same. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Nobody does it better than this ! ~*Marge* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lost Dreamer--both poems are super!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
L.D Very beautiful piece. From now on when I see my shadow I'll think of you. Tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marge: Thank You very much Martie: Thank you, glad you enjoyed them Tracie: How sweet a thought, Thank you |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow...these are some of your best, LD. You certainly have a way with words... |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Sharon: Thank You very much, I appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
As one of your readers, I thank you...this is wonderful writing! ~ Claire |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
LD, I loved the shadows theme here. It is wonderful!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Meadowmuse: Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed Lone Wolf: Thank you very much |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes.... a wonderful poem... and then its shadow... very nice, Gloria...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Being 'shadows', I am touched by this poem. Very beautiful concept. ~shadows dance by the light within~ |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Nan: Thank you so much passing shadows: Thank you glad you enjoyed May you all glow in your shadows today, tomorrow and forever. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Lost Dreamer, as one of the sweet talking guys, this speaks with wonderful lines. Bravo! Parker |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Parker, Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lost Dreamer These are beautiful, beautiful thoughts, placed perfectly on the page. A very enjoyable read, clever, and well written. Excellent! Liz |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! Lost Dreamer ... can you tell how much I love this piece ?! A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Elizabeth: Thank You very much Pepper: I'm so glad you enjoyed this, thanks for reading and your kind comment. |
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