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My Vow
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My Vow |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I am vowing to recommit < !signature-->So that we may reach the summit Stretching striving for the peak This is no place for the weak I will do what it takes To try and replant the stakes That have slowly fell apart Now it's time to restart Would you be my love again And my one true best friend This is how it should be All about we, not he or she Two individuals united as one The bond that's felt is second to none Each day filled with perfect bliss Our happiness will be endless This could be a vision of our marriage With our child sleeping in a carriage Silently he reaches out his tiny hand And peace rules throughout the land Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 21Canada |
Beautiful poem, Wolf. Great Job! "So close, no matter how far, couldn't be much more from the heart, forever trusting who we are, and nothing else matters" -Metallica- |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Great poem. I love the ending. Perfect. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Taking old love and trying to make it new again..admirable and extremely beautiful. Lovely poem. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
VampDude....thanks, it's how I feel. Lucius....thank you...I thought it was a fitting end. Hopefully it will come true some day. Cheryl....that is exactly whre I am right now. Thanks!! ------------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Lone Wolf, This is beautiful and so well written. Your words are a little hard to read right now as my husband and I are in our "last ditch effort" so I wish you all the luck in the stars. *Angel Wing Hugs* to you. .gif) |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Nice job, Lone Wolf! Hope everything works out for you... Troy  Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Butterflies_don't_cry....thank you and perhaps we should e-mail sometime?? I see you are also from Michigan....we have much in common I think. Good luck with your "last ditch effort". I do relate and am about there myself. We have to try one last time though. Thank you for the hugs and please hang in there. Send me an e-mail if you would like to speak further about things. Troy...thank you and I hope it does too. Time will tell. --------------------------------------------------- Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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