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*Tis Love's Design*
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*Tis Love's Design* |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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My soul falls hush With a whisper From your lips… Softly coated words Sway ‘tween you and I In undying kiss… The sweet melody Of your heartbeat Completely mocks mine… And lulls me off To dreamland- In a moments time… We will not falter… *‘Tis love’s design* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I hear your whispers, I feel your heart. There will be no faltering here. Thank you, Sweetness. Michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mmmmmm i just love "desire by design"...(smile) beautiful poem of longing and promise devina. take care jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice opening stanza, devina... "My soul falls hush With a whisper From your lips…" .. nice follow up too..  |
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