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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Bittersweet My darling, oh my lost darling... I remember your laugh, your smile. I see your beauty, laughing with glee as we played, once so youthfully. The tears and anguish, like the tide wash through me with vengeance. I’m so sorry, my love; even consumed why did you have to leave so soon? Thinking we had all eternity our plans secure within tomorrow. Yesterday destroying, today so alone touching your things in our empty home. Why God, why do You hate me this much? I scream into the gale till no more will come. I kneel in the sand, wracked with my grief your smile, your laughter; echo bittersweet. DJBurt EndoftheRoad 3/00 (all rights reserved) there is only one... Romans 10:9-10 |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, this is so very sad  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So very sad, yet beautifully written! Well done, Bleeding! Denise |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Dan...this is one makes me want to reach for tissues. Beautiful and sad. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thank you for the comments. Sad, agreed i don't much like writing them but it's therapy...lol bleeding there is only one... Romans 10:9-10 |
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