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Sing of My Love
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Sing of My Love |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Light of my life, you have emerged from my heart's own darkness Leaving the darkness of your own heart to bring me back Giving me the strength to break these chains of hate Showing me the courage that for so long I felt I lacked Your voice singing the song of love to which my heart hearkens Spirit of my heart, you have awakened my senses with your gentle touch Making my skin tingle with the kiss of your gentle caress Awakening in me feelings unknown for so long Helping me find the love I've waited for a lifetime to possess I'll never be able to repay you, for you have given me so very much Lover of my soul, you have stirred in me the coals of passion's fire Fanning the flames higher with a mere wave of your hand Stirring my mind with the depth of your yearning Hours spent with you seeming like minutes, grains of sand I've always known it could be like this, my heart's own desire. ------------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Interesting rhyme scheme you choose for this one. I like it  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I see that little song bird we know and love has inspired you again...(smile) this is beautiful Sven and full of the romantic heart we have come to expect in your poetry...  thank you so very much for the sweet reply to my poem tonight...you made me smile BIG TIME...  take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
Aah....I love the sound of this kind of music....I'm glad this is the last poem I'll read tonite....my soul will be singing tonite. BEAUTIFUL SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL! take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
A beautiful poem I love the first line where you say emerged from my hearts own darkness (hope I got that right! I forgot to type it down!!) This sings from a heart filled with love Sven. Thanks for sharing it with us "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sven, you describe the feelings of real love so beautifully, and it is so wonderful to see people who has found it! Corinne |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sven, this is very nice. I like the unique rhyme pattern. You always do a great job with romantic poetry. Must be why you have a groupie of poetry lovers hanging on your every word. Nice work. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Sven... Whassup with you?... Nice job here - Your work always has a uniqueness about it - amidst the constancy of romance..  |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Sven, That was wonderful. I know how you felt. I really enjoyed that one. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Beautiful Sven, I just about got out the kleenix box. Marina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven....beautiful words. You muse must be smiling on you. Very romantic...sigh. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Hoot, the scheme just came to me, I'm always playing around with them, never one for convention me!! Janet, thank you, it's nice to be known for something. . . glad that I can make you happy. . . Broken Wings, thank you so much, I hope that I was able to help your heart sing a little more. . . Tess, you're welcome. . . Corinne, thank you . . .it's been lost for a long time. . . Danny, I have groupies? LOL PLEASE!!! I'm nobody special, just a regular guy. . . Nan, I've always thrived on being different. . . Terry, glad you liked, and welcome to Passions!! Marina, you may need some more of that Kleenix later. . . LW, thank you. . .my muse does indeed shine brightly. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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