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Open Poetry #6

What do you see?

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-12 05:13 PM

What do you see,
When you look in my eyes?
Is it such a surprise,
The way you hold me?
It was nothing at all
But there has to be a start
To get inside a heart
And it begins with a fall
Everything in life is a gamble
To succeed is to take a chance
Even in another romance
After love was in shambles
To toss me away
If that’s what you choose
Then you know you’d lose
Like the ending of the day
When you think of me,
Do you become unsure?
Or do you see your future?
Look into my eyes and see….

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2000-02-12 05:38 PM

I like this one. So? What color are your eyes?

INclan

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

2 posted 2000-03-24 11:53 PM

I think some more people need to look into these eyes

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-24 11:59 PM

What do you see,
When you look in my eyes?
Is it such a surprise,
The way you hold me?
It was nothing at all
But there has to be a start
To get inside a heart
And it begins with a fall
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LD...you read my mind tonight...(smile)

jer, this perfect...
stalking you and falling...

your jm

Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

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