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I can't wait
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I can't wait |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I can't wait, I can't wait, I can't wait for you, I can't can't wait forever, To know you, Time won't let me hold you, You said you're coming home, I can't wait for you, I want to love you , I missed you so much, I'm exicted that you're finally coming home, Hope you were missing me Like I was missing you , I missed you so much, So that's why Iam so happy to see you again, And I can't wait for you, I can't wait, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes the waiting seems like forever. I hope your waiting is over soon! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Sounds like someone is a little anxious. Nice poem Vandana. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hi there, little VanDana~ Somebody is anxiously awaiting the arrival of someone special ... I like the enthusiasm of your anticipation.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Vandana I know how you feel. I don't mean to pry, but......(who is he?). Whoever he is, Glad he's finally coming home. Your poem certainly reflects your excitement. Liz |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Vandana, You've aroused my excitement also! I hope he gets home soon. I enjoyed your work. David2 |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
The waiting is the hard part   |
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