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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2000-03-23 09:22 PM


You Are My Pleasure

How can I tell you of my pleasure
In the early morning hour
In the quiet still of dawn
Your eyes awake like summer flower

When the softness of your voice
Comes floating sweet across my bed
Then whispers lightly in my ear
These splendid pleasures fill my head

You look at me with piercing eyes
And sunsweet kisses on your lips
And my heart beats in ecsatcy
No greater love is there than this

I love you more each passing day
Each hour of life, each breath of air
You are the visions of my dreams
An angel love beyond compare  

Come let me hold you in my arms
Come let me feel the breath of you
I love you even more today
It is your birthday ( number two )

Happy Birthday, Kyle
From Grandma

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-23 09:27 PM


Happy Birthday Kyle!! This is so beautiful, Elizabeth!! I know exactly how you feel!

Denise

Martie
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2 posted 2000-03-23 09:30 PM


Oh Liz...those little ones will remember your wonderous love and your beautiful poetry!!  This touched me in the place where I long for those "little ones".
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3 posted 2000-03-23 09:30 PM


Elizabeth~
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww !

HAPPY BIRTHDAY !
~KYLE~


Love
~*Marge*~
  

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4 posted 2000-03-23 09:38 PM


That is one lucky tyke! Happy birthday, Kyle!!!!!!
Elizabeth
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5 posted 2000-03-23 10:09 PM


Beautiful work, Elizabeth! Wish your grandson a happy birthday from me!
             

Elizabeth < !signature-->

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
  -The Crucible



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bboog
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6 posted 2000-03-23 10:35 PM


Feliz Cumpleanos Kyle y Aniversário feliz! Este poema será um tesouro grande para você um dia! (Sorry, my Portugese isn't the greatest)This poem is a gift you'll come to treasure one day. You're on a roll, L~
bboog

[This message has been edited by bboog (edited 03-24-2000).]

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2000-03-23 10:58 PM


Elizabeth, Happy birthday to Kyle, a beautiful poem. Love Sy
hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 2000-03-23 11:44 PM


How sweet...give the birthday boy a kiss for me too  
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