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couldnt think of a title (any ideas welcome)
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
Lost in a daze , gone to far , just out of reach . Pulling my hair , sucking my blood , just like a leech . Sun is bright , lightened my hair , just like bleach . staring at the sea , staring at the sand , just me on a beach . All my pupils , i have , just one lesson i have to teach . "all i wanna be , is washed out by the sea" |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Title: "The Lesson" What's the lesson?????? A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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infinat3 sadn3ss Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85somerset england |
im replying to send this back to the top |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Cabes, I can almost taste the lonliness with this one, love. I am somewhat useless with titles...one thing I do know is that this is a great poem, I REALLY like his one. You must tell me, what is the lesson...?  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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