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Fair Rose |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
What creature this, that comes in still of night, Upon the wind, on feathered wings of grace? 'Tis thee mine Rose, in glow of Luna's light, To soothe the tempest's ire; harsh storms complace. Mine haven sought within thy satin bloom, I drift no more upon life's raging seas, For in thine arms, mine fading light relume, As Dante's gales, thee calm to gentle breeze. Fair Rose, my love for thee adamantine, Shall evermore, within mine heart reside, As I await once more the vespertine, Mine harbor sought, upon thy eventide. Thou art Venus, mine goddess of the night, O' beauteous bloom, sweet jewel of welkin's light. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 03-23-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--this poem is pure magic...I wish I could write with such grace and intelligance that you display in this exquisite poem. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This must be the day for sonnets!! I'll have to get busy and see if I can come up with one! This is absolutely beautiful, Mike! But of course!! Denise |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Such beauty of words...that none compare, as the beauty of the rose......loved it! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"As I await once more the vespertime..." Way to go, Mike.... That's only my favorite line - I love 'em all..  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ It's wonderful. Nobody does roses better ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Your poetry takes me back beyond the days of recollection, beyond, to a time when love was made with words such as these. The images graceful and adoring, the language delicate, charmed. The atmosphere, one of evening's illumined appeal. "'Tis thee mine Rose, in glow of Luna's light," "For in thine arms, mine fading light relume," "As I await once more the vespertine," You weave magic with such words, such phrasings, Mike. Thank you for writing and sharing this. ~ Claire |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
*applauds* Beautiful, beautiful! Elizabeth "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!" -The Crucible |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Mike...wonderful sonnet dear man  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Martie, you are the definition of grace. Denise, I await the beauty of your next sonnet. Romantic Heart, a rose to thee fair maiden. Nan, you throw out a good line or two every once and a while also... *smile* Marge, thank you so much to a wonderful poetess. Claire, your words overwhelm me, you know what I think of your poetry. Elizabeth, thank you, thank you. *smile* Hoot, thank you so much my friend. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I might as well swoon with all the rest of the ladies in here...I've got nothing to lose! LOL *swooning*  Exquisite poem sir, as always. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Absolutely lovely, Mike! Corinne |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Awesome Mike ! Love it ! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Excellent...truly excellent... |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
Wow...I love this style...the images..the eloquence in the words....but its one that I will have to read a few times to savor the full effect. I look forward to finding more of your work to read "What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies." -Aristotle |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Ms. Fatale... thee are a swoonee and not a swooner... *smile* Thank you kindly Corrine. Munda, thank you ever so much... I need to brush up on my Dutch... *smile* dhuron and Tess.. thank you very much for the response. |
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VampDude Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 21Canada |
Mike, amazing job my friend... a most exquisite work of art! I love it!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Mike, beautiful words. Great references. A joy to read!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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