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Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap

0 posted 2000-03-22 11:58 PM


A seething storm within me swirls --
It grips my soul, forsooth --
Yet I dare not take up the quill
And let it speak my truth;

The might of words cannot contain
Nor tame this ruthless rage:
For should I lay it out in ink,
I fear 'twould scorch the page!




 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-03-23 12:04 PM


Oh, yeah ! Kess~
And a nice little 'ditty' it is !  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2000-03-23 12:07 PM


Skyfyre,
Exquisite, simply exquisite. Sy

Meadowmuse
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3 posted 2000-03-23 12:17 PM


I love this, Kess!

So glad to see your byline...hope you're well.

~ Claire

devina
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Cali
4 posted 2000-03-23 12:38 PM


JUST a lil ditty my butt...lol  You've expressed yourself well Kess...
Nan
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5 posted 2000-03-23 07:49 AM


Hehe... wanna borrow my quillstinguisher??
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 2000-03-23 10:54 AM


Wish I could write little dittys like this.
From you they flow like water from a cascading waterfall, with such freedom and purpose.
Very nice.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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7 posted 2000-03-23 10:58 PM


EXCELLENT!!!! Wow Kess...I can't tell you how many times I've felt the same way. Way to go girl, this is a great piece of poetry  
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8 posted 2000-03-23 11:14 PM


Kess,
     if I can find my Ullean pipes, would you like to sing this one with me?

Excellent as always, my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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