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Talaira Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 10Colorado |
FIRST CHILD When I looked into her eyes I fell hopelessly in love Springtime was now forever flowing through my heart How is that that when she cries my soul wrenches in pain And when she smiles I'm lit alight in heaven's joy Gazing upon her I drift into joyous dreams A lifetime of memories I will inscribe upon my soul |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhh, the love for your child, there is nothing sweeter. May all of your memories be as sweet as this poem. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Talaira....Hang on to those precious memories. The bond you are building today will meet the challenges of tomorrow. Sweet poem!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Beautiful expression. You now know the meaning of life. Such a simple secret don't you think. |
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Talaira Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 10Colorado |
Thank you for your feed back. It's very encouraging.  |
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