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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 2000-03-21 08:39 PM


My heart to you I give
So that I may learn to live
My passion for you is true
If it wasn't you'd see right through
I show it in so many ways
Through the nights and in the days
A kind word, a sweet caress
My feelings for you are endless

You can feel it in my kiss
The look in my eye you can't miss
When we are all aone
Making love I softly moan
I need you to make me whole
Your heart completes my soul
WIthout it something's missing
The feelings your dismissing

They are for real and come from the heart
If you dare let's make a new start
There is my heart please take it
I trust that you will not break it
Our love may reach high
Could be unbounded as the sky
Will you take this chance
So that we may once again dance?


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-03-21 08:53 PM


Lone Wolf~
Oh,YES !

~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2000-03-21 09:27 PM


*sighs*  
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2000-03-21 11:48 PM


I hear the wolf howling in the still of the night!!!....whew! Me thinks I need a shower under a waterfall!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


Corinne
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state of confusion
4 posted 2000-03-21 11:57 PM


Lovely and super-romantic!

Corinne

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-03-22 05:17 AM


Lovely feelings..I to hope when I give my heart she will not break it.   James
Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2000-03-22 02:49 PM


Marge, Corinne, Hoot Owl....thanks!!!

Romantic Heart....hope it is heard by the one it was written for.  The waterfall sounds very nice though!!!!

James....hope is all we can ever do, but we should not be afraid to take the chance.  Good luck!!!!


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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