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Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida

0 posted 2000-03-21 06:01 PM


My hands are the cradle, in friendship a’curved
Caressing and holding – nurturing the dream
That one day ‘twill grow to love much deserved
A’tween and throughout our hearts to redeem…
Together – our pain – the past
And our future
~Ours~

Your hands are the strength, of friendship refined
Moulding and guiding – ‘ere forging the spark
That blazed in both, yet we hesitantly inclined
To recognize hope, whilst hearts leave their mark…
Together – our pain – the past
And our future
~Ours~

Daring to hope, that perhaps this be the time..
But hearts still a’healing, and souls ever fearing
Curiosity though, entwined in lines of a rhyme
Burning is the need to know –  tho’ hurts adhering

Very truly, we each have our own separate pain
And aye, they are but memories of separate tales
You and I, separately, are of our pasts’ remain
But victory is Us, and all that entails.



 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

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endoftheriver
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 6

1 posted 2000-03-21 06:07 PM


may you stay.....forever young...smiles
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
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2 posted 2000-03-21 06:08 PM


Wow - amazing poem, satiate.  It's intriguing the paths two people can walk separately and ant the same time so closely together.  All these paths cross for a reason you know, I know you will find the Victory you speak of.


Michael

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
3 posted 2000-03-22 02:26 PM


end: lol..thanks, and welcome to Passions  

Michael:  Intriguing, indeed my friend.  We shall see, eh?

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

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