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She sleeps |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I think this is a repost? She Sleeps She lies like dead upon the bed, Alive the land of things unsaid. Sleeping the ebb and flow salon And the dawn has come and gone. I fear her state of near yet far, Her mind to long in Shangri-la. Held to hard to the non aware, I question time and is she there? Alone she lay so sweet and still, In rest her body needs to fill. Yet still she shows no sign of wake And do I dare the slightest shake? Will she excuse the rude intrude? Or will it cause vicissitude? In tender love I vacillate? I love her, no matter the state. The question is my love to wake? Perhaps the slighest little shake? I think I'll wait a little more And then just SLAM the bedroom DOOR. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
To wake tis late to stop the snore slam the door.. Sy, this was so sweet and then that last line ...was quite a treat! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, This one made me laugh. Loved it Liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you for re~sharing, Sy. I loved the smile this brought. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ When in sleep I am mired it's because I'm really tired. If you choose to make hay while sun is shining, just go away ! Let me sleep within the me of peace and quiet without thee. Be forewarned, for goodness sake ... I'm a TIGER in early wake ! *You amaze me with your words. I didn't see this before and I'm glad it tickled my fancy on this evening. Thank you, my love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...hehehehehe.....Sy, you little devil! What a hillarious ending!  Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LOL  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, So glad you enjoyed. *L* Elizabeth, always happy to make you laugh. Love Sy Meadow, You know two smiles are equal to one laugh. *L* Marge, Happy sleeping and put bumpers on your doors. *L* Denise, Thank you for sharing a laugh. *L* Hoot, Thank you for the LOL. *L* |
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