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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Lady of my heart Where do I start? You are the part Your love the art Show me the sky Teach me to fly Take me so high Our love the tie My love for you Not old, quite new Fills my heart too As love can do Our love this night Casts a bright light Your eyes, my sight Just feels so right ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Very lovingly put Sven...simple love is always the best of all...  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I really like your shorter version and your rhyme sceme here Sven. Simply and well put. Marina |
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Windrider Silverbreeze Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 33 |
very well written. Simplicity is sometimes the easiest way to express things |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Simple, yet wonderfully put. Love in the most basic form, Sven. Well done. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Short and sweet, yet speaks volumes of emotion and yearning. Well done  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Short and sweet |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . sometimes simple is the way to go. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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