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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Messages of pain buried in my skin (again and again and again) Pavlonian biology... to my garden, I must tend. Once burned we learn instinctive retraction-- recoiling from the slightest warmth-- much less the hint of heat of passion. I wish to be where you are now, at distance from myself. Writing up the commentary, returning book to shelf. Violating protocol-- worried I might offend. I'm not surprised that I'm surprised-- just the way it's always been. So I offer, in humility, all that I can manage. But understand when you take my hand, I suffer still from damage. Forgive me if I trod on toes, I haven't danced for years, ya know... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Dear sis...please email me...if you should need to talk...you're in my thoughts, ya know??? Much love ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
serenity, we all carry some damage with us. And don't worry about them toes... when it's time to dance... Dance!!! I truly feel you pain. I only wish I knew a way to ease it. Michael |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you, thank you, and worry not! I shall e mail you, my sister! (As soon as I figure out how) And Michael, I've got a couple of quarters for the poetic jukebox, do ya think you could write a happy ending for me? (Think "Io", and I shall be much obliged!) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
[email protected] (thats the address sis-) use it!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Messages of pain buried in my skin (again and again and again) Pavlonian biology... to my garden, I must tend. -------------- So I offer, in humility, all that I can manage. But understand when you take my hand, I suffer still from damage. ------------ serenity, this poem is perfection...i was taken by its words and emotions...in the things we must have in common... your pen danced while writing this one...  and I would like to thank you for the very sweet and supportive words to my poems here and over in DP... you always touch me and make me smile. take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Janet Marie understands me. Thank you. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I understand this too.....well. |
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