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Width Times Distance
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Width Times Distance Waterfall of lovers kiss cascading hidden emotions into raging wild fire falling with extreme passion to the vastly unexplored flowing riverbed of harmony's pleasure. Floating in a constant stream of desire upon the inflated innertube of life casting sunbaked doubts haphazardly toward the jagged rocks that threaten to destroy simple happiness. The strength of the rivers undertow brings realities depth back to sensible view the width times distance keeps happiness alive forever. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I love it! I love the the imagery you used here, specially the second stanza! Wow! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Finally, I can get in and respond!! This is absolutely beautiful Gloria!! Such imagery! Very lovely!! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Dreamer, this imagery is second to none! It's obvious you put a lot of work into its creation....and it came out very well. Applause and appreciation here.  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
WhtDove: Thank You very much, glad you liked it. Denise: Thank You for always having wonderful compliments, I'm glad you liked this one. Balladeer: Thank You most kindly Sir, you floored me with your reply coming from a man with the talent you have it meant a great deal to hear your applause. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lost Dreamer~ I like the mathmatical equation here. Great designing images for sure. Simply superb ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Too good to fade away, so BUMP! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i thought twas gonna be how when yuh get older (distance) yuh get fatter (width) but this an imagery bonanza!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Gloria...wow, this is wonderful. I think this is amoung my favorite of all your works...good job |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, Gloria, this is one of your best in my opinion. Love the "Inflated innertube of life" line. That coming from one who's hit some pretty sharp rocks ya know! Good poem.Michael |
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