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The Belltower's Tale
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The Belltower's Tale |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
The Belltower's TaleThe belltower's tale has impassioned the soul of the one whose strong hands restore history, whole, forging ever and on through December's cold days in the towering winterhues, dark blues and greys. Climbing up through the structure of ancient intrigue, each day rising early, soaking sunset's fatigue. He's on top of his world and delightfully high, for the belltower is beauty to my artist friend's eye. As his vision unfolds, is reborn through his craft with hard work, sweat and toolchest, sufficiently staffed, he can proudly survey what his time, toil and sight have so faithfully brought to his belltower tonight.  Claire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Claire, so perfect and pure is the tone of this poem...You write with sureness that comes with wisdom. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very good Claire....flowed so nicely! |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Wonderfull and very visual. Great work again! Chris Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Another great one from claire...i love how you almost tell a story, i can see and feel it. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Appreciating the beauty around us is one of life's most delightful pleasures! We should all cultivate that 'eye'. This is fantastic, Claire! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, this one rings  What a fine tale |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow, Yor have opened a window to a wind of subtlety. And its touch has shown pictures of subtle debris. A facinating poem of thoughtful entwine. A mixture of mystery roses and wine. Love your stuff. Sy |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
She weaves a tapestry of words, with her craft she does enthrall. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful and mysterous, Claire! Corinne |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A superb work, Claire You amaze me. I loved this Liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you, everyone. I'm glad you found something to like within this piece. Take care, ~ Claire |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Not to sound repetative, but this is excellent work Claire |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
beautiful poem...flowed wonderfully |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Mistikman, I thank you so much for reading and letting me know that you liked this. Blondie, thank you...I'm glad you enjoyed reading this piece. ~ Claire |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ I'm intrigued by this piece. I enjoyed the image of the 'artist of the belltower'. Quite the intrigue. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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