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How Did You Know? |
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Daniella New Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 5WA |
How Did You Know? You see my tears even though I don't let them Fall, You feel My hurt when I can't find the strength to climb that Wall, You look inside And take Me as I am, But yet You encourage Me to grow for the better with Time, Until I hear the ringing of the "come home Chime" You stopped in your tracks And took a look back But most others kept walking along, Thank You for helping me to see that I belong. You hear my pain and confusion when I don't even speak one word, The caring touch You bring me, Is like the joy of seeing a sweet soaring bird This is why every day I have to thank God for You, Because without You what would I do? Written by: Daniella |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Truly beautiful sentiments Daniella - everyone needs someone like this in their lives. Welcome to Passions...  K 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Daniella this is beautiful writiing..I really liked "And take me as I am, But yet you encourage me to grow for the better with time." James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniella~ Welcome to Passion's.  Friends always know. Nice sentiments you've expressed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
you've expressed yourself well...we need more expression of raw emotion...WELCOME!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's very nice to have you here at Passions, Daniella... and with a poem that's full of wonderful sentiment.. Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Daniella! This is absolutely beautiful! Denise |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
empathy....it's wonderful to know those who have it  Terrific poem, Daniella Thanks for sharing and welcome to Passions! -molly aka sam Fleeting World "Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world: A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream; A flash of lightning in a summer cloud, A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream." -from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice poem. Welcome to Passions. Daniella is one of my favorite names. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WELCOME! to passions!!!!  I felt this was written for a friend or parents,maybe a boyfriend...reminds me of the song...Wind Beneath my wings! Great poem! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Nice writing Daniella! Welcome to Passions! Marina |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions |
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Daniella New Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 5WA |
Thank you all for reading my first poem submitted. I wrote this when I was a teenager about my best friend, who is now my husband. |
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