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Mischief in the night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Mischief in the night Into the silence of the night, Where sleeps shadows of the light, Walks a restless mind in gleam, With the treasures of her dream. Placing wonders that are grand, On the keyboard with her hand. Floating cobwebs into space, With a smile upon her face. Delighted with the thoughts that fly Across the room and through the sky, To settle in a warm embrace. Another room, another place. And with the softness of her words Frees a flight of humming birds. To fly about her lovers bed. To fly into her lovers head. And there in dream her lover smiles, As fertile thoughts, entice with wiles. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ooh seymoure you little mischief maker... this is SO great... I love this poem it mystic and cryptic and its about my fav thing..cyberlove  very nice... Placing wonders that are grand, On the keyboard with her hand. Floating cobwebs into space, With a smile upon her face. Delighted with the thoughts that fly Across the room and through the sky, To settle in a warm embrace. Another room, another place. great writing in this one... take care jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy, to express the words for this like the first sweet lover's kiss... vintage flavor and boquet just more then I can say today. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I couldn't agree more. You've outdone yourself with this one, Sy. Perfect wording presented perfectly (don't ask me to say that 3 times fast). This is as excellent as it gets. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is wonderful!!! you have done an amazing job Sy!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janet, Thank you for the mystic, cryptic and great. Sy Martie, Your comments are the greatest. *L* Balladeer, I'm putting your excellent in the bank, Thanks. Butterfly, Thank you so much for the wonderful. Sy |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A taste of shadows' song surreal from lover's sway and longing feel ...this is beautiful, Sy, and sets my soul to longing. ~ Claire |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, You amaze me more and more. Just when I think you're at your best, it gets better. This is superb writing to say the least. Keep writing, dear friend Love ya Liz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Seymour, You tickled the ivory of delight with melodies played in the night. Lovers caught within the web of notes sent dancing in lover's head. Beautiful, maestro! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seymore...this is absolutely delightful  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow, And I love your writing too, thank you. *L* Elizabeth, Your comment warms my heart and what ever else there is to warm. Love ya Sy Marge, Wonderful comment, thank you love. Hoot, Delighting you is my pleasure. *L* |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
beautiful wording seymour -molly aka sam Fleeting World "Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world: A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream; A flash of lightning in a summer cloud, A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream." -from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Perfection, Seymour! I think we have all done a bit of this magic! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sam, Thank you molly aka sam. Serenity, Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. *L* |
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