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zgkluckman New Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 4 |
I hope you all won't mind,but i love sharing poetry.Anyway,here goes. Beauty A moment spent Basking in spring dawns A moment taken Holding a white rose to breathe of it's perfume These perfect moments of creation Have no comparison Still i find in the instant of a breath These are not as beautiful to me Nor slight chill of winter scenes A night spent in contemplation That hillside dance of cadence In which the stars indulge The perfect stillness of the breeze In which a heartbeat May capture the agelessness of trees These hold not a candle To the strength of my love for thee These are not as beautiful to me The silent whisper of the wings As a butterfly sips upon the nectar The ambrosia of an elegant lily the sweet night spawned fragrance As the jasmine celebrates The eloquence of life and silence The multitude of beauties the innumerable moments of perfection These are not as beautiful to me For that moment of your love When our eyes might meet That briefly glimpsed sight When words have no need These are moments of rebirth And there is no comparison That the smile upon your waking Cannot wipe away For your every breath in life Is perfection in my eyes Zach K. I hope i don't seem rude posting so soon.I just can't help myself.Hope you like it. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions, Zachary.. Let me understand you now - You've come to this forum where we share poetry, and asked if we mind if you share your poetry??.. Umm.. I do think it's all right with us.. This is a pretty good entree, as well.. Check your email for a special greeting.. Nice to have you here, Zach..  |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Zach! Your poem is beautiful! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A heartfelt "WELCOME" This was a beautiful piece to start off with. I hope to read more of your work in the near future. Whatever strength I add to myself becomes my greatest weakness, while whatever weakness I'll consciously endure will be replaced with a strength that is not my own. G. Finley |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Zach, This is wonderful, I look forward to more of your poems. WELCOME TO PASSIONS Cerenity |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done, welcome to passions, I'll be looking forward to more  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely zach, and welcome to passions! As an aside, this formatting doesn't all for getting too fancy on layout, as you probably know by now. (S) Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Zach, Welcome and you placed some very good lines. Enjoyed |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
This is beautiful Wonderful wording... I loved "the silent whisper of the wings". Great job! And welcome to Passions! Hope you like it here!-molly aka sam Fleeting World "Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world: A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream; A flash of lightning in a summer cloud, A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream." -from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome to passions! Beauty is a beautiful poem! beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and I behold this poem as beautiful!!!!  "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Welcome to passions This was devine and I liked the way you presented it. Looking forward to reading more of your work tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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