Open Poetry #6 |
Circus o' Fleas (written with WhtDove with ease) |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
The fleas went a jumpin Oh this way and that Started scratchin my head One got under my hat So you view this stranger guy Scratching head the big ninny I do sayeth! “Fleas right here!” Tho’ just might not see any Grab them magnifiers C’mon and see the show My fleas are a jumpin And each day they will grow So under the big top spy A marv'less three ring event The fleas for me work for free Shh! They think they’ll get a cent They jump over hurdles Go through hoops with such ease And all get together For the flying trapeze They all have pretty voices Time for opera o' the fleas But when its smoke break time They bustin' out the Misty’s The reward they will get When the show is then over They’ll have a mighty feast On my ole pal Rover Sigh, Rover is on the lam Now they perform major sights Rover he charges two bits And the fleas are paid two bites! this was fun she wrote every other stanza starting with the first one yuh! < !signature--> OH YUH! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Nice work. *brings in the flea bath* |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
yea, wayoutwalt does rule, heh, great work guys |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
W.O.W. and WhiteDove~ Just too cool ! You both rule ! Just a flea bag and a fool ! Yadda yadda ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A flea here, a flea there You two, noone can compare My head I'm now starting to scratch As for this subject I just can't match EXCELLENT Where's the flea powder Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Deftlea done my friends.. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, you two!! You write very well together!! Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
so we think alike hehehe i wonder what whtdove would say about that i dunno i rather like the idea hehehehe..thanx guys |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
What would I say? NO WAY! hahah j/k Walt! Anytime |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I'm gonna be itchin' and scratchin' all night now....great compilation you two! Michael |
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