Open Poetry #6 |
For any Passionate People with age greater than mine. |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Looking around an expanse of friends, I begin to realize I'm surrounded with age. How comforting is a knowing hand Always ready to take my own, And pull me toward the right path. How wonderful it is for a smile of years To be sent to me from afar. Brimming with the wonder of living Wise years already, And being willing to share this with me. I'll remain forever fond Of that absurd sounding logic That they would know me In days when they were my age. "Imagine (says she with a shake of the head) That they could possibly understand, The depth of my pain and joy." Nothing I could tell any of them Would be new to them nor baffle them, But they would pretend so For my own good And seem to be walking the same path When they have already tread similar ground. Using the word "age" I mean no harm. It is the most respected position known to me. It doesn't mean that youth is gone. It only means that experiences are many. For we never truly grow up. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
the last few lines save yuh from the politically incorrectness and gave me a smile o warmthness |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice tribute, Temptress... LOL... we might have a hard time figuring out just who is "older" around here, of course.. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Uh, I'm 25...do I qualify? Michael |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I must admit ... we've been around the block in many directions ... but we still learn new experiences every day We love to share with those experienced enough to listen Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Lovely tribute to a great bunch of ppl. Don't listen to Michael, he is accually ancient..so he qualifies...lol. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well I just turned 21, so does that make me older or younger than you? Great expression, Temptress! Denies |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Well, I certainly feel young, but I do qualify as a senior citizen some places, and I can say I took an early retirement, rather then just unemployed..and I've learned a bunch of things and still am...nope, I haven't grown up yet, and I ain't going to and I'm certainly not old, or always wise. Thanks for the sweet poem! |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
21 plus tax My 11 year old daughter came to me this day with wishes of Happy Birthday she than asked if I was old OLD!! I said Today I turn 34, Ya she said 34 is old! at least that is what I’ve been told I replied Old my child is not what a person is But rather, what one becomes If ever we forget the laughter than tis true old by way of number is to what we each succumb I still believe in fairies I look for angels in the sky With you I swim , I run threw grass Climb up the trees to sit on branches as we two watch the world go by On our bikes we explore the world around We sit in silence observe the Deer the Fox in forest bound Search threw creek bed seeking treasure that beneath the mud and water dwell Toboggan, Ice skate , with you each winter Laugh out loud as each time I recall the many painful moments that on to my butt I fell Old! no That is not what I am Yet I have aged and that is true With each year I have learned many a lesson Most my sweet child, I learned from loving you If you allow within your heart freedom , innocence To view the world threw the eyes of a child all moments to be, all moments yet untold Then not a single year that passes by will ever make one old But , just in case along life’s path another asks my age I say, well my friend, this is fact smile as I reveal I am today and always a mere 21 plus Tax I live in canada with pst and gst I will 4ever be 21 plus tax Smile my friend age is a beautiful thing Raven |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Umm..I hope I didn't offend anyone with this. I'm 24 by the way. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
GEESH....20 and feeling like a baby in here...G* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I guess you are as old as you feel. I'm 43, been accused of looking 32 and feel like I'm about 22 or so. I look fondly upon the late 60's and early 70's as a time I'd like to revel in for at least the next 43 or so years. I don't wanna grow up. So I won't. BTW no offense taken here Temptress. I've learned alot but won't lay down and get old because of it. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Windrider Silverbreeze Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 33 |
*chuckle* Well I'm 24 (or will be in 12 days). And I know how you feel. You're only as old as you feel |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This was so dear and so warming, Temptress, and not the least bit offensive. To the contrary, it shows a faith in your friends here on Passions. And incidenally, also well written. Liz |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I think this is wonderful. They can help us through so much! And Shawna's got the right idea...don't ever stop laughing and living. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well Temptress...being just a bit older than you, I only have this to say. There are really only two ages, living and dead and I think everyone on this forum seems just about the right age to do anything they dream of |
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