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tulip
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0 posted 2000-03-19 04:07 PM


I'm out on the water
the wind blowing fast
the waves gently guiding
my life and my past.

My anchor is gone
I'm sailing away
I'm out in the ocean
living my day.

I look for some guidance
out here in the breeze
tossing and turning
I'm starting to freeze.

I'd like to head back
but the boat sails away
I'll keep heading forward
as I hope and I pray.


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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-03-19 04:10 PM


Keep peddling! I like this one..there is hope...  
Denise
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2 posted 2000-03-19 04:49 PM


Sometimes we feel adrift in the ocean, don't we? I wish you a safe voyage!

Denise

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3 posted 2000-03-19 08:37 PM


Keep sailing, who knows what might be over the horizon for you  
Aimster
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4 posted 2000-03-19 08:58 PM


Tulip,

I liked this a lot! In self-discovery, who knows what lies ahead. I wish you much luck in your future!

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2000-03-19 09:24 PM


Tulip~
I like the very idea of being
set adrift ... you did a nice job.

Many's the boat
set adrift on the sea
finding that we all
have buoyancy.

The winds will change
and when they do
the land will come blowing
back into view.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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mete out
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england
6 posted 2000-03-20 04:48 AM


***Tulip,
You are strong enough to go against the current.
You have loads of support here too,  keep going and you WILL make it.    


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


tulip
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7 posted 2000-03-20 09:35 PM


Thanks to all of you,
I am adrift, but I'm moving forward all of the time!!!

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