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nona
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since 2000-03-03
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0 posted 2000-03-19 02:52 PM



The phone call came
the one we dread
the bell tolling for the dead.

As I lay in my bed
with visions raging through my head
thrisking me through the layers of
unconscious sleep.

Who can this be?
what do they want?
as you flip thorough the files
of faces in your mind
Did someone die?

Your heart begins to race as you
flip from face to face
who can it be, oh please let me see,
this must not be a call for me.

Now fully awake from a fitful slumber
you hear at the other end of the line
Forgive me please I have a wrong number.
                              nona



 

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-19 03:35 PM


That's one time for sure that you're glad it was a wrong number.

Denise

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2000-03-20 02:56 AM


Nona I've found myself thinking just like you a few times...probably because my close friend Margaret passed away and my mom is 73.
I called her one evening and a man answered and ask who I was..  I told him I was James and he said he had some bad news for me..so I said what is it..and he told me Margaret had passed away in her sleep the night before..I told him that was bad news..death waits for no one.   James

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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3 posted 2000-03-20 02:58 AM


whew yuh i know this well yuh good job you did
nona
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 139
Fla
4 posted 2000-03-20 09:35 PM


I actually have more than on ending for this poem not sure which I like best the other one
is for the right number as it really happened
this is more what I wish had happened
Thanks for your comments Nona


 

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