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Pure Love Revealed |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Whispers in my ear Soft tones appear Sounds enter Chants of desires Flooding waves Take the senses Mood altering Flustering feelings Act upon emotions Pulse races Droplets start Faint of heart Stronger defined tones Don’t want out Or dare I Take the chance Consenting touch Helplessly alive Tears now stream Reflections from both Chanting forms clearly I dare except No fear abides Desires match perfectly Pure love revealed desires complete By, Cerenity [This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 03-19-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice - The building tempo of emotionalism runs rampant here, Cerenity - I like it..  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Cerenity~ Me too ... I like it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi its just me Cerenity, I do not normally write like this so I feel like no one will understand what I was trying to say. This is about falling in to love and the fears and joys, and finally knowing it is true love on both sides. Thank you, Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful Cerenity! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity-1, Good thoughts, good poem, well done. |
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