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Sven
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0 posted 2000-03-16 10:28 PM


Look deeply into my eyes dear one
For they hold the secrets of the stars
I have seen the brightest galaxies,
     Beheld the farthest suns
But the beauty of your face, my love
     Outshines them all by far.

I have walked along the shores of alien oceans
And sailed on the vast celestial sea
I have seen the moons of Shandell
     And drunk deeply of love's potions
But never before and never again
     Will beauty like yours speak to me.

Come and gaze at me upon the stars my love
All their secrets to your heart I will tell
I will be gazing at your face
     While you look at the stars above
And together we will fly, hand in hand
     And heart in heart as well.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2000-03-16 11:16 PM


This is great Sven! Sort of a sci-fi love poem!  
devina
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2 posted 2000-03-17 12:32 PM


This is sort of like the futuristic romances I've read!! I really really loved this Sven...gentle as it was!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


Marina
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3 posted 2000-03-17 12:15 PM


An original piece from an original poet! Is there no end to your talents?

Marina

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4 posted 2000-03-17 09:16 PM


How romantic.....wow.....sigh.
StarrGazer
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5 posted 2000-03-17 10:49 PM


Sven this is beautiful, wonderful, I love it !!! thanks           five smiley face rating !!!

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~



Denise
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6 posted 2000-03-17 10:49 PM


Very romantic! You're good at these challenges, Sven!

Denise

PoeticKnight
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7 posted 2000-03-18 12:09 PM


I gotta hand it to you Sven, you really wrote an awesome piece here...look at all the women swooning....LOL
Sven
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8 posted 2000-03-18 12:32 PM


StarrGazer. . . glad that you liked. . . and I'm am quite honored to recieve your highest rating!!

DeVine--yes, it is kind of Sci-fi isn't it?

Devina--I have read those futuristic romances too. . . I love them so. . .

Marina--Thank you, if you keep up your compliments, I'll get a big head!!  LOL

Lone Wolf--Thank you. . . and welcome to our family. . .

Denise--Like I've always said, I love a challenge. . .

JML--thanks for the compliment. . .and I don't know that all these women are swooning, perhaps it's just the wine that I served!!  LOL

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marina
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9 posted 2000-03-18 12:37 PM


That was the desired effect...however that's in Adult!!!


Marina

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10 posted 2000-03-18 12:48 PM


You will find a new post there now.  That is if you can handle it!!

Marina

Sven
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11 posted 2000-03-19 12:57 PM


Marina,
       I saw it and yes, I did handle it, but were you able to handle the one that I put there?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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