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The StarrGazer--Challenge #2
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The StarrGazer--Challenge #2 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Look deeply into my eyes dear one For they hold the secrets of the stars I have seen the brightest galaxies, Beheld the farthest suns But the beauty of your face, my love Outshines them all by far. I have walked along the shores of alien oceans And sailed on the vast celestial sea I have seen the moons of Shandell And drunk deeply of love's potions But never before and never again Will beauty like yours speak to me. Come and gaze at me upon the stars my love All their secrets to your heart I will tell I will be gazing at your face While you look at the stars above And together we will fly, hand in hand And heart in heart as well. ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is great Sven! Sort of a sci-fi love poem!  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is sort of like the futuristic romances I've read!! I really really loved this Sven...gentle as it was!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
An original piece from an original poet! Is there no end to your talents? Marina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
How romantic.....wow.....sigh. |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Sven this is beautiful, wonderful, I love it !!! thanks  five smiley face rating !!! ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very romantic! You're good at these challenges, Sven! Denise |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I gotta hand it to you Sven, you really wrote an awesome piece here...look at all the women swooning....LOL |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
StarrGazer. . . glad that you liked. . . and I'm am quite honored to recieve your highest rating!! DeVine--yes, it is kind of Sci-fi isn't it? Devina--I have read those futuristic romances too. . . I love them so. . . Marina--Thank you, if you keep up your compliments, I'll get a big head!! LOL Lone Wolf--Thank you. . . and welcome to our family. . . Denise--Like I've always said, I love a challenge. . . JML--thanks for the compliment. . .and I don't know that all these women are swooning, perhaps it's just the wine that I served!! LOL ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
That was the desired effect...however that's in Adult!!! Marina |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You will find a new post there now. That is if you can handle it!! Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, I saw it and yes, I did handle it, but were you able to handle the one that I put there? ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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