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I love what you do to me
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I love what you do to me |
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Kyttn Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 10MO |
The breaking of dawn, as I arise Wiping the sleep from my weary eyes I gaze out of my window to see the sun... Like the sun, you bring light into my life And chase the darkest clouds away... I step outside, into the day A breeze blows gently through my hair... I close my eyes and I think of you... Like the wind, you are the breath of fresh air That whispers softly in my ears... As I stroll along the sunlit way I hear birds twittering somewhere Cheerfully, in the distance... It reminds me of how my heart begins to flutter When you are on my mind... I come home at the end of the day And hear the silence all around me.. And it makes me think Of the peace that you bring me... A warm, serene feeling washes through me. I prepare for bed, and once again Gaze out of the window Into the stars above... And i'm reminded of the sparkle in your eyes That I see when you gaze upon me... Closing my eyes, as a wave of sleep washes over me I drift into undisturbed dreams. And I smile to myself as a final thought passes through my mind... It is the thought of you... And the feeling of absolute joy and love that you bring me. |
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Adriahh Junior Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 18 |
I'm not a big love poem fan.. but I really saw your words alive in my head, in animation of course  Adria |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I enjoyed your poem. I write mostly of my wife when it is a love poem (or else). keep up the good work. Melton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kyttn, Enjoyed the read. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
enjoyed walking through the day with you |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Great poem! I'm not waving, I'm drowning! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I hope you gave this to the one you love! I'm sure it is appreciated. Nice poem!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kyttn- This had a soft flow to it. I enjoyed the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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