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adam
Junior Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 10
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0 posted 2000-03-14 06:53 PM

          "MY MONSTER"

HE TALKS TO ME WHEN I CANT SLEEP.
THE ERIE SOUND OF CONSTANT
CREEP.
QUIETLY STALKING WHILE I
PRAY.
FEEDING ON THE INNOCENT WORDS I
SAY.
HES HIDING NOW SO YOU WONT
SEE.
FAR AWAY INSIDE OF ME.
I NEVER KNOW WHEN HE MIGHT APPEAR.
THE EVIL PRESENCE CALLED MY
FEAR.



 
Adam C Roberts(outlaw)
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NewbiePoetGuy
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since 2000-03-14
Posts 13
Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA
1 posted 2000-03-14 06:56 PM

very interesting, if not cryptic poem, but very well written
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-03-14 06:58 PM

I believe that monster is in all of us to some degree.  
Nicely worded.
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