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Open Poetry #6

Loneliness (a haiku)

Joannak
Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 121
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2000-03-13 10:52 PM

My heart is breaking.
Depths of despair, haunting me
Never again, love.

jk

[This message has been edited by Joannak (edited 03-13-2000).]

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-03-13 11:18 PM

Sadly beautiful. Well done!

Denise

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

2 posted 2000-03-14 04:56 PM

Joannak,

sad but very powerful and well written. Thank you for posting this.

INclan

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

3 posted 2000-03-14 06:12 PM

A heart is such a wonderful thing. It can be broken endless times and it continues to work. They just don't make things like that anymore.
Nice haiku!

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