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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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What if  What if I told you I love you... Would you turn me away? Would you embrace me and share your soul yet another day? What if together we were meant to be... Would you turn me away? Would you look at me and love me forever and a day? What if it was never too late for love... Would you turn me away? Would you share your world with me from that day? What if true love came to you once more... Would you turn me away? Would you see the love we're longing for and cherish it day to day? What if I could not live with out you... Would you turn me away? Would you take me and love me for every moment in every day? What if tomorrow we could be together... Would you turn me away? Would you take my hand and walk by my side together into the days? ....For Randy.... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely poem, Marie, full of longing. I'm sure he'll love it! Denise |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
this is beautiful mariee  I miss being in love  *sigh* But I'm happy for you -molly aka sam "One does not discover new lands without consenting to lose sight of the shore for a very long time." -Andre Gide |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
this is a really good poem Marie. Certainly something I can relate to. Oh, love the dolphin! Marina |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ Such lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thank you Denise~ Yeah, it's full of longing~ Molly... thanks much~ True love will find you one day~ Marina... Glad you liked it~ The dolphin is sort of symbolic... had to use it  ~Marge... your poem on longing was great~ Thanks for your reply~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marie This poem was written with such passion and intensity. a lucky guy he is! kudos to you for writing a beautiful poem. take care, Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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NewbiePoetGuy Junior Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 13Thousand Oaks, Ca, USA |
Marie, that was a truly excellent poem. I know how you feel, believe me. best of luck to you in all your pursuits whether they be romantice or otherwise, Larry |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
mariee ... what if ... you show him this poem and give him a sad eyed smile ... turns most guys to mush Rex}<{{{{o> |
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jazzgal Junior Member
since 2000-03-07
Posts 37 |
Mariee, this surely is a heart felt one. I love it! Has he read this yet? May |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Amy~ Thank you for the compliments ~Larry~ Thank you, too, for the compliments~ I wish you the best as well~ May both our hearts one day no longer know what longing is~ Rex~ Too many miles are between Rand and me~ When(if) I see him, I'll try that tactic ~ May~ Yes he has read it~ I didn't get the reply I was hoping for... sigh... ~ Thanks all~~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
Marie, This was great-- full of longing. I hope you and Randy will someday be together. You are in my thoughts. Z |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I really like your poem! the format, the questioning! it was great! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thanks Liz (aka Z)~ Someday.... ~ RH~ That was very kind of you~ Thanks much~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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