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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Love Lost Come.. save this soul don't let me drown In love lost deep as oceans wild of valley's wide between hills, rustic ever valiant never the story ending like time, endless and infinite but fragile, similar to autumn leaves whisked away crushed, scattered into.. nothingness Dark Angel 2000 < !signature--> What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-17-2000).] |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
Wow. I hope someone does save you, if not, there may not be any more poetry like this, brilliant and beautiful. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ You are penning some mighty fine poetry from your soul, gal. This is rendered with longing. Magnificent. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dark Angel, This is wonderful, I like the way you compared loosing love, very well written. Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sad yet beautiful, well done, Dark Angel! Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Tragically beautiful! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DA: Beautifully said..  HUSG I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'... We are all works in progress, no? |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful.....I know just how you feel. Thanks for expressing it so well. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ya know I'm amazed at what you come up with when you're hurting. Awesome stuff! I wish you weren't hurting, but I love the poetry girl ~HUGS~ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
One day Soul Sis you will write poems of joy...  Hugs - and wonderful poem. Love K 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent DA. . . and yes, I know that in my heart, you will one day write poems of joy. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Surely someone is out there to save you hun...with writing as heart filled as this...they must all be running!!! Good luck!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
DA...this is absolutely wonderful. Free verse at its finest |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Enola, thank you for your lovely reply ----------------- Thank you so much Marge, so glad you like it ----------------- Cerenity, so glad you liked it Thank you----------------- Thanks Denise ----------------- Sharon thank you ----------------- RG, Thanks Hon. ----------------- Lone Wolf thank you for your lovely reply ----------------- Angel, so glad you love what I come up with, thanks for your lovely reply. ----------------- Sweet Butterfly, I look forward to that day thanks so much for your lovely reply and I'm glad you like it. ----------------- Thanks Sven ----------------- devina, thanks Hon ----------------- Ruth, thanks for your lovely reply and compliment. *hugs hon*What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is beautiful. You did a remarkable job!!! |
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