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Lady in Red
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 147


0 posted 2000-03-12 10:03 AM



Oh my goodness what are you all doing here ?
In this Alice of Oz reddish atmosphere ?
Did Wizard Villanelle sent you down this way
With another spell made only yesterday ?
I see my Crayon King is still out of breath
On the yellow brick road he laid down his head
Please attend to him One Flew Over dear man
And carry him along as far as you can
The paper marriage must wait ‘til he revives
If needed I’ll give up my own precious life
My King I begon thee, come back to this world
We need you to see how this venture unfurls
Right now we could surely use Sir Lancelot
Hope he finds us on his way to Camelot
Let us go and find the magic Silly-bus
Scavenge we must each and every campus !

Lady in Red

  Juliet




 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou


© Copyright 2000 Lady in Red - All Rights Reserved
Justin Sayne
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 53

1 posted 2000-03-12 12:56 PM


Lady in Red, it's Justin Sayne
You think you're cool with that long mane
Stopped by to tell you just one thing
You'll never catch the Crayon King

He last was seen on yellow bricks
His satchel full of crayon sticks
The road of yellow you once knew
Is turning now to Passions blue.....

Justin Kace you get that down,
He'll pull out crayons colored brown.

Nurse Crachet
Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318
They know where I am!
2 posted 2000-03-12 07:22 PM


I'm attending to his shallow breath right now
I think he'll be coming around soon
we'll color as soon as ample time will allow

We'll start coloring a lusterous path so creatively
We'll use an array of rainbow waxy colors
together we will design art destinctively

The colors will blend into a fabulous masterpiece
of colossal beauty for eyes of awe
to relish and destine it a Grande show piece

ONE FLEW OVER
Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 55
Cuckoos Nest
3 posted 2000-03-14 12:07 PM


My Lady Red
I came to help
but King is no longer
on death's bed.
He's creating drawings
with Nurse Crachet
and I must admit
they are interesting drawings.

U K Hero
Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266
England
4 posted 2000-03-14 02:03 PM


enjoyed much...
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