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From Hands To Soul
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From Hands To Soul |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Look at these hands holding bundles of shame. Forgive me for caring despite my true name. Look at these fingers they tremble with fear. Please go away you're some how too near. Look at these eyes; they speak now for me. If I were much smarter I'd set this bird free. Look at my soul, for now you may know that my hope grows restless the second you go. Look once again. Try not to pretend, that from my hands to my soul I've met a lost friend. Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
look at this poem... see how it moves me, look at its gifted poet... her words can set her free... perfection from your pen...once again  take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
christy, this was just plain beautiful! as always your work is wonderful and inspiring. keep it up. amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Christie~ A lovely look at your emotions. Enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
JM, Aimster and Marge,Thank you for such kind words.  Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very thought provoking and beautifully written. Marina |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Thought this was very well written. What else can I say? Back to the top you go. |
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