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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-03-10 11:41 PM

Where once (repost)

Where once her presence filled the air,
Now just sets an empty chair.
Where once there rang the dinner sound,
Now the silence is profound.

Where once a scent did fill the room,
Now the scent, a bloom less bloom.
Where once her vibrants moved the light,
Now lies coldness and the night.

Where once played footsteps on the floor,
Quiet now the portal door.
Where once her love in full rapport,
Silent now forever more.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2000-03-10 11:44 PM

Beautiful and sad... and very well done!

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-03-10 11:48 PM

Lovely, Sy. Where once there was a poet, there still is..and he is YOU....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2000-03-11 11:30 AM

Suthern,
Thank you for the well done. *L*

Poet deVine, I love you too. Sy

angel girl
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

4 posted 2000-03-11 12:28 PM

This is so sad, but yet so beautiful. Very well written.

One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-03-11 12:29 PM

Seymour~
You touched my heart with a memory
that caused a tear to fall.
I thank you for reminding me
of someone who is worth my tears.
Bless you, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2000-03-11 01:23 PM

Sy, you have flooded me with memory's tear,
for the loss of someone very dear
and the drowning cry that I hear
is only angel dust coming near.

A lovely poem!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2000-03-11 04:46 PM

Angel, thank you for the beautiful comment.

Marge, you are to me a breath of spring,
       The air about a butterflies wing.
       The color and sound of tenderness.
       The softness and the dreaminess.
Like Nan, I love you too.

Martie, May the angel dust
        Bring peace adjust.
*L* Sy

Denise

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8 posted 2000-03-11 05:42 PM

Beautifully melancholy, Sy. Just wonderful.

Denise

StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

9 posted 2000-03-11 09:56 PM

very nice poem

~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2000-03-11 10:42 PM

Denise, Thank you for the wonderful comment. *L*

Starr, Thank you for the nice.

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