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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Quiet moments held by heavy clouds as the snow shadows blanket the ground Fat flakes swirl clinging curiously to a warm window pane Snuggled on the couch we watch sentimental movies my head in your lap your hands petting my hair You stare at me Daring me to meet your gaze which I do Cocoa brown pools hold mine a small smile spreading to create a dimple in one cheek Your heart beating freely within your eyes I am frozen by your purity paralyzed by emotions displayed there I see your beauty that I do not deserve and I am terrified My unworthiness exposed within a single traitorous tear swept away with a patient finger Bathing me in that knowing look you pull me into understanding arms that never ask for more than I can give… < !signature--> I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan [This message has been edited by Breathe~ (edited 03-11-2000).] |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Ewwwww.... I see the errors...  Sorry folks...I kinda typed this off the top of my head and didn't check for mistakes...Hope you can bear with me...  I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent, Breathe! I can relate to this in so many ways. Very very beautiful. btw- The errors are no big deal. You can go back and edit whatever you wish. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Awwwwww....much better! Thank you Alwye... I didn't know I could edit... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
MARGE!!! I thought you might like this cuz it is more positive...But nope! *turning up her nose* I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathe this is absolutely beautiful! I love it!!! I'm sure Marge will when she sees it too! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BREATHE~ I'M HERE and I LOVE IT ! It is just awesome, refreshing and full of hope. 'you pull me into understanding arms that never ask for more than I can give…' This is full of beauty in the lines ... you've done a wonderful job of showing tender emotions. Yeah, I like it, little one. ~*Marge*~ SMILES ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This was so beautiful, filled with such longing emotion but also understanding. I too relate well to this, thanks for posting for all to see Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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