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AnthonyEV1 Junior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 17St. Charles, IL, USA |
This isn't as good as my last one, but I did put a lot of feeling into it though. I feel my heart Sink to my chest I feel my mind Almost explode How could a guy Do such a thing As to force things Onto these girls Doesn’t he know It tears them apart Doesn’t he know It takes a part of them away Each time this happens Doesn’t he care He is messing these girls up Doesn’t he care She can never be the same That this feeling will always be in her Doesn’t he hurt When he hurts these girls Doesn’t he hurt To know he makes girls pregnant Doesn’t he hurt Knowing how he kills these girls insides He does not hurt from this So I shall make him hurt It may not be right But he deserves it He should get back Just a small splinter of hurt That he has caused these girls He has hurt them physically He has hurt them mentally Now I will hurt him physically And sit and watch him cry |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
KICK HIS ASS!!! I was in the same predicament as you and I resolved the matter with a baseball bat. Never seen the guy since, dont give him a splinter of pain, splinter his god forsaken spine. |
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AngelDust Junior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 30Minnesota |
Wow, very moving... I'm going to have to agree with EagleScorpion here though, KICK HIS ASS! It was a very good poem though, good job and nice expression. -Angel- |
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AnthonyEV1 Junior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 17St. Charles, IL, USA |
Thanks for the replies, I didn't think anyone would respond to it. And I was surprised that both of you thought I should beat him up hehe. I thought if I did get a responce it would be something like, "no don't do that it's wrong" Not that I would listen to that though...  This guy just deserves whats coming to him, he has gotten a few girls pregnant and still does this every day. And not a thing is being done about it.... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
When you're done with him I have a name, an address and a plane ticket.....lol, For those who have told me that an eye for an eye is not the right way to feel....well they just don't know how it really is now do they? I know it wouldn't take away any of my pain but................ Great release of feeling you are a great writer with a pure heart. Thank you for allowing me a moment to vent myself |
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AnthonyEV1 Junior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 17St. Charles, IL, USA |
LOL Butterflies_dont_cry I probably would take you up on that offer hehe. Good way for me to vent and I wouldent feel bad about it cause the person deserves it. Seeing that guy get the crap beat out of him would make you feel a tinny bit better probably. It really wouldent solve anything, but would be fun to do and fun for you to watch hehe. Thank you for reading it and replying, and if you ever need to vent, I've got a email address and ICQ. It's fine by me if you ever want to talk or just need someone to yell at. |
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