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Inducement of benign

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-03-07 11:16 AM

Inducement of benign

The opiate tranquility,
Fills my pipe of ire.
The subtle of futility,
Dissipates desire.

It curls in disappearing smoke.
It layers time and awe.
It shrouds me in a warming cloak,
It soothes away the gnaw.

Devolves away the hurt and pain.
Narcotic and a door.
It hangs away my full disdain.
It smokes away the bore

I see the world upon a stage,
To be or not to be.
It takes away the feel of age.
The mirror, what I see.

It suffers me my time benign,
Into the soothe of dark align.

Denise

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1 posted 2000-03-07 11:23 AM

Very creative, Sy! I love it!

Denise

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

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state of confusion

2 posted 2000-03-07 11:24 AM

You're one awesome poet, my friend!

Corinne

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-03-07 11:55 AM

*Humbly bows to the Master of Poetry* Excellent job Seymore

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2000-03-07 04:05 PM

Denise,
Thank you for the creative. *L*

Corinne.
Thank you for the awesome. *L*

Hoot,
Form one poet to another, thank you. *L*

Martie

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5 posted 2000-03-07 06:22 PM

Can I have some of that tranquility...comes at quite a cost? Another wonderful poem, Sy.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2000-03-07 08:54 PM

Martie,
You can have all you want, Thank you *L*

Nan

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7 posted 2000-03-09 06:18 PM

Whatever you're smokin', Sy... You should have more of it....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2000-03-09 10:10 PM

Nan,
I'm smoking your wonderful comments. *L*

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