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Open Poetry #6

My love for you

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

0 posted 2000-01-26 02:35 PM

My love for you is just right,
Maybe sometime I can show you all night,
You are beauty at it's Finest,
When I see you I think may I make to you my highness,
Because girl your so fine tonight,
I just want to kiss and hold you tight,
My love for you is a fun ride,
Now please don't run and hide,
I love you,
Now I am going to show it,
That night you were so hot,
and don't think your not,
When you turned night into day,
That is the way,
I am going to remember you,
Hom cute you are,
when you act cool,
I love you enough to never hurt you,
If I did the planet would go boo,
So if you want to test my might,
Come with me and stay all night,
Your hot to me,
I must say,
But for me stay that way,
I love you more than you could ever know,
But one day I know it will show,
How much you mean to me,
So find me and you'll be set free,

A love poem by Jay vaughn.

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

1 posted 2000-01-26 02:44 PM

better! much better! so much sweeter than the other one! but the other one was good too! nice work!

"Superiority to fate is difficult to learn. 'Tis not conferred by any, but possible to earn"--Emily Dickinson-"Superiority of Fate"

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

2 posted 2000-05-10 05:33 AM

Definitely more happy. Good, too..

I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

3 posted 2000-05-11 02:17 AM

Hi jytree!
Its just like the one I have! Beautifully expressed. I loved it but remember patience is the key.
Sincerely
A_L

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