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silvershaddow
Junior Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 19


0 posted 2000-02-14 06:22 AM


My Forbidden and Secret Love

You know I'll always trust you
I know you'll take good care
Its not 'cause of you that I worry
But the other idiots out there.

I know that now you're taken
And I know that you'll never be mine
But please don't leave me on my own
For any length of time.

Each time you enter into my life
I smile my secret smile
And the flame in my heart burns brighter
Just being with you for a while.

But when you leave me on my own
I shed my secret tear
For although I know that I shouldn't
I like to hold you near.

And as I try and close this chapter,
I must accept that it'll never be
And wish you all the happiness
Just you, and her, not me.


Written by Alison Verkroost


© Copyright 2000 Alison Verkroost - All Rights Reserved
Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-02-14 07:09 AM


I'm so lucky I haven't had to face that situation yet...thanks for bringing it to my attention!  

Great poem!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

angelswing
Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
2 posted 2000-05-08 07:21 AM


Nice poem Ali, it reads like a book, smooth and descriptive, you should get back into this poetry lark, it's great and you certainly have the talent for it .
L.of.L. Tom


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
3 posted 2000-05-09 04:01 PM


Hi S!
That was a nice portrayal of what others can do if you're don't have a mind that reasons when required.

Sincerely
A_L

Casonova
Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 35
Mays Landing
4 posted 2000-05-10 09:14 PM


Hey silvershadow,
  Great post here, I really appreciated it, cause I have gone through exactly the same thing, and you brought it out so clear. thanks again for this. And welcome to passions, I think you'll enjoy it here.
  

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